Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Visual Imagery Analysis: UBS Financial Services Social Responsibility


As a large financial firm, UBS Financial Services has an obligation to serve the community and world around them. A large amount of information is given on their website about their commitment to be responsible with the environment, in the community, to their employees, and customers.

The image UBS chose to brand this section of their company struck me as interesting. They chose a photo of a white masculine hand digging in dirt to plant a green leafy plant into the ground. The coloring in the image struck me as bold and intentional. The clean hand digging in the dirt symbolizes the employees of UBS who are always working to ensure satisfaction and who are willing step out of their clean behind the desk jobs to care for others, and at times that may mean getting a little messy. The green plant symbolizes the benefits ensued. The use of a plant visually demonstrates their commitment to the environment. 

The image communicates well UBS Financial Services' desire to be socially responsible. The choice of a close up image of a hand planting a tree shows that they want their responsibility to have a long-term effect. This plant will grow into a larger tree and last for years to come and provide numerous benefits during its lifetime. To put it into one word, the image is SUSTAINABLE.

In terms of the critics world view, the image does not pose and issue of ethics. The photo captures a physical demonstration of social responsibility. I can appreciate the absence of guilt and offensive material. But, as the only visual used, it should depict a broader range of people. A simple suggestion for improvement would be to have multiple hands planting the tree.

Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Pentadic Criticism: Mormon Church TV Campaign



The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints has a campaign running to remove the negative stigma of the Mormon Faith. In this brief essay, I am going to explore how this campaign message pursues this purpose using pentadic criticism and how the motive helps to determine how the Church views the world.

Their current campaign puts a familiar neighborly face to Mormons. The messages focus on sharing brief life stories during a commercial slot and at the very end of the film they casually reveal that they are a Mormon.

This ad in particular tells the story of Joy, a professional Hawaiian long boarder. She tells the story of her life  in Hawaii and emphasizes the relationships within her family. She talks about the competition she won and the and the excitement that brought. During the last 20 seconds she relates long boarding to her place in the world and the need to have a firm direction. At the last moment, she says, "and I am a Mormon."

Below I have identified key terms and placed them in the pentad as either an act, agent, agency, scene, or purpose.

Act: Joy is a Mormon
Agent: The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints
Agency: Joy, a Mormon, sharing her testimony through a commercial spot
Scene: Hawaii
Purpose: To make Mormonism appealing

After applying the ratios to one another, I have identified the dominant term as the Agent.
Joy is a Mormon because of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, she shares her testimony of growing up in Hawaii during a commercial spot because of them, and it is the church who drives the purpose.

By identifying the act as dominant I am able to get at the motives of the story and figure out what the film maker wants to say. The church chose a young and talented girl to represent them. Joy has role-model qualities and her story relates well to those with strong family bonds or a desire for it. Choosing Joy was strategic and I believe it was to help rid of the negative stigma given to the Mormon church. But, by removing the negative stigmas they are hoping to evangelize and bring people to a greater understanding to their beliefs  and to join their church.

This purpose reveals what they view about the world. The Church of the Latter-Day Saints believes that the world is a reachable place. They believe that the world needs a savior to save people from their sinful nature. But also, they believe that the world does not approve of them and lacks an understanding of the Mormon people. 

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Pentadic Criticism: Dan in Real Life


In the film Dan in Real Life, the main character Dan has not been able to move on and find love ever since his wife passed away years ago. Within this story there are multiple smaller stories and important characters. The film focuses on this larger story, it overshadows the other smaller situations and I would argue causes most of the other problems in the story. Through looking at the act, agent, agency, purpose, and scene I am going to find out which term dominates over the others and through that analysis answer the question of what motivates this story.

The story of Dan falling in love weaves throughout the whole film. In the scene at the begging of the film, Dan takes care of his three girls by doing their laundry and frustrates them with his controlling demeanor. After traveling up north to meet his family for Thanksgiving, he meets this woman in the bookstore. They have coffee together after hitting it off at the bookstore. She then gets up and leaves frantically because her boyfriend calls for her. Dan goes home only to find out that his brother’s new girl friend is the woman he just fell in love with. Dan falling in love with this woman and having to watch her and his brother sweet talk for a couple of days ends up driving both Dan and the woman crazy and she leaves. He follows her and tells her he loves her. The brothers end up in a fight because Dan took his brothers woman, but the other issues Dan has with his daughters seem to look up after they give him permission to chase after her.

Coming up with the list of what to call the act, agent, agency, purpose, and scene was difficult. I wrote out four or five different scenarios and decided to label them as this:

Act: Dan falls in love
Agent: The woman
Agency: Meeting in the bookstore and having coffee together
Purpose: To help Dan move on from his wife and release control over his girls
Scene:  Up North in Dan’s parents town

After analyzing each term against each other, I found that scene dominates over the act, agent, agency, and purpose. Being up North causes Dan to fall in love, causes the woman to be up North, causes the woman and him to go out for coffee, and helps Dan to move on. If Dan was not up North than he would never have met the woman, therefore never fell in love, and as a result never moved on from his past wife.

Other terms that are dominating, but did not show up as strong in my analysis are the woman and meeting in the bookstore and having coffee together. The woman caused Dan to fall in love, to meet and talk, and to move on. Having coffee together caused Dan to fall in love and move on. The woman falls short by one point in being the dominating term. But, scene takes the lead because the woman would not be able to do all those things if it were her not being up North.

So, what motivates this story? Being away from normal, routine life has caused Dan to rethink things. Being around his family and their concerns for his well being has created a unique atmosphere, one where he can fall in love because his daughters are being taken care of and his daily responsibilities are relieved. Taking a break from the normal to have time to relax and reflect was important, but it was the need for Dan to relinquish the pain he his holding on to in order that he can find happiness, but also for the well being of his family that motivates this story.

Friday, November 5, 2010

A Narrative Analysis: The Heritage and Mission of Starbucks

Every day, we go to work hoping to do two things: share great coffee with our friends and help make the world a little better. It was true when the first Starbucks opened in 1971, and it’s just as true today.

On Starbucks's website there is a link to the company's heritage. This blog posting explores their Heritage/Mission statement as a story and I am analyzing and critiquing it though a narrative perspective.I am first searching for the purpose of the story and how the story serves that purpose. My critique will then answer the question, does this story have coherence and fidelity?

The Heritage story exists to inform us of the roots of their company. It allows us to have a deeper understanding of the original Starbucks and why their company functions the way it does today.

It starts off with a thesis that provides Starbucks's mission in a simple two sentence paragraph. The words chosen are pursuing their mission by using words "share, with our friends, better, help, hope, true." These words were carefully chosen to portray a friendly and relaxing atmosphere. The choice to use the words "we" and "our" places themselves as actors but also includes the reader in the story, Starbucks's consumers are part of that "we". The remaining paragraphs in this narrative give a story of how Starbucks was created and its journey to today. This is important, because when you are a part of something you need to be an expert on it, that means knowing the history.


Towards the end of the story, Starbucks states its mission "to inspire and nurture the human spirit – one person, one cup, and one neighborhood at a time." Their heritage lines up with what their mission is. They try to be a personable place that acts as an oasis to relax, think, and be inspired. Howard Schultz's (Starbucks president, chair man, and chief executive officer) inspiring experience in Italy was what lead to his passion for Starbucks and now functions as the driving force behind the mission. 


The heritage story starts out with their current mission worded differently than the official, then it brings you back to its roots and how the mission was created and closes the story by going back to current times. At the end of the story the reader has an understanding of the company on a personal level. The heritage does not speak about business terms, it talks about a consistent desire and a passion to inspire people. 


Overall, Starbucks tells their story well through the word choice and organization of the elements. After reading their heritage statement in relation to their mission statement, I believe Starbucks has coherence and fidelity in their rhetoric.


To read the full Heritage statement follow this link: http://www.starbucks.com/about-us/our-heritage